Too Many Cool Colors
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Too many straight lines
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This painting had the opposite problem as the last painting. This painting has too many cool colors.&
Too many straight lines
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The changes that I made weren't nearly as extensive.
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Before
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After
-large acrylic impressionist painting on canvas
18x36
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What I Did!
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This whole painting is almost all cool colors. Design wise there are a lot of straight lines that need to be broken up. Some straight lines are OK, but this painting has gone a little overboard. The land, the shoreline and the water itself, all form a straight line.
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After
-large acrylic impressionist painting on canvas
18x36
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What I Did!
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To break up the line that the grassy field formed, I added the trees on the horizon.
-I also added the warm yellow field. This warm are against all the cool colors really makes the painting pop. When I painted the yellow field, I brought it down to the waters edge, again breaking up the straight line that the green field formed.
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To break up the line that the shoreline made, I added some more dark bushes and reflected them down into the water.-
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The bushes on the horizon and and on the shoreline, also serve as a visual stop, to keep your eye from going off the painting.-
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I hope this correction series is helpful. It is often hard to correct your own paintings, as you have locked yourself into looking at the painting in a set way, and have a hard time deviating from it.-
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